Invisible--another random poem start Please comment!

Except this one has a title.

I am invisible.

I've been in this room for days.

People come in, and they go out.

But no one ever stays.

I am filled with loathing, full of doubt.

In this cold, fake sun...

I'm watching you walk away.

But that's where my terror runs

In rivers of decay.

But I'm still invisible.......

And I promise you

I'll get out, sometime soon.

And then it's true

I can walk freely among the dunes.

I am still invisible......

No one comes to offer me comfort.

Every move, every single thing.

Smiling is even an effort.

But I see them, and I'm crying.

I won't ever smile again.

I'm ravaged by the damages of this hell.

I'm tired of looking out at the rain.

From this lone bed where I dwell.

Because I am invisible.

No one knows my name.

No one here even cares.

Everyone here is the same.

No one changes; no one dares.

And I am still

Invisible.

Okay, this was written since I just got out of the hospital, and it was fricking torture. And I wanted to go to the beach, (the walk among the dunes part) and I had to stay and have heart surgery. Yuck.

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